Working on Trapped I came accross several questions that I need help
answering.

One problem concerning lemon content. I want the series to be read by
almost everybody, but some parts (particularly chapter 1) may be too
lemony for some readers. Also sexual references will occur during the
series, and I would like to know what are some people's oppinions on this.
How far would be to far. Should I make 3 versions, a G or PG rated
version, PG-13 rated, and R rated version. 

Script vs Prose: The final version of Trapped will most likely end up a
combination of both. Most of the series will be in prose, but with scenes
with excessive dialoge (particular when concerned with more than two
people) will be in script form. An example would be with Chapter 3 where
scenes like the breakfast or Ranma greating people at the gate might be
easier to follow in script. I'll write two versions of one of the chapters
in the combined format and the other in prose format and see what the
prereaders think. I'll take C&C on this now though.


One last thing, a realized I missed a couple important scenes in Chapter
4. Particular the throwing of the bridal bouquet and garter. As I plan on
this scene being a foreshadowing of future events, I would like to know
want people's thoughts are about this. So I'll leave it to a vote:

Who should get the bouquet:
Kasumi
Akari
Shampoo (she'll really hate it when she finds out its significance.)
Ukyou (you better also suggest to whom, and how she might get to that
	point.)
Nabiki
Kodachi
other

Who should get the garter:
Ryoga
Mousse (Shamps would not be happy about this either)
Dr Tofu (I have an interesting scene in mind if I go with him).
Kuno
other

I of course have the deciding vote over who wins, but I'm curious to see
who wins this vote.

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