Welcome the Darkness
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I hope you guys liked it. On another certain ML, I recieved
some pretty hurtful remarks about one work I sat down for months
trying to get it done.
The premise has appeal.
I don't know about the rest of the FFML, but the writing format is a
bit hard to read. You might want to consider adding the occasional
paragraph break to make reading it a bit easier.
I liked the X movie. I'll be watching for more of this fic.
See ya
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/ Here lies:\ "Oh my god! They killed Kenny!"
| Andrew | http://www.ugcs.caltech.edu/~ttant/SouthPark/
| |
| I think | Andrew Petalik {ICQ ID: 160869}
| he's hungry | "I am Cornholio! I need some TP for my bunghole.
| | I have no bunghole."