Subject: Re: [FFML][X] Welcome the Darkness, Prologue
From: Monica/Akira-chan
Date: 10/7/1997, 5:15 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

At 10:27 AM 10/7/97 -0400, Andrew M. Petalik wrote:
Welcome the Darkness
<SNIP>
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       I hope you guys liked it. On another certain ML, I recieved
some pretty hurtful remarks about one work I sat down for months
trying to get it done.
The premise has appeal. 

I don't know about the rest of the FFML, but the writing format is a 
bit hard to read. You might want to consider adding the occasional 
paragraph break to make reading it a bit easier.

Yep. That would have helped... 

I liked the X movie. I'll be watching for more of this fic.

*sigh*
X movie. 
... 

No comment. Okay, one comment. 

Extreme dislike =P 

See ya

Monica
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