Gary Kleppe wrote:
On Fri, 03 Oct 1997 02:52:09 -0400, "Douglas A. Reeves"
<dougreeves@earthlink.net> wrote:
As always, C&C is very greatly appreciated, and I'd rather have it torn
apart than have serious flaws overlooked. At any rate, here it is...
I tried to tear it apart, really I did.... :-)
All I can say is that this is great stuff. I really felt Ryoga's pain.
Everybody else seemed very well handled too. I'm still wondering (as
is Ryoga) what Nabiki is up to, but I'm sure we'll find out next time.
Thank you; this is very encouraging to hear... I was *really* nervous
about this part. I spent a lot of time hammering out the Nabiki scene
in particular . . . much gratitude to Nick for the assistance there.
As for what Nabiki's up to? Heh heh... all shall be revealed in time.
*grin* (Hopefully not too long; I hope to finish part five within the
next two weeks.)
Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics