On Fri, 03 Oct 1997 02:52:09 -0400, "Douglas A. Reeves"
<dougreeves@earthlink.net> wrote:

As always, C&C is very greatly appreciated, and I'd rather have it torn
apart than have serious flaws overlooked.  At any rate, here it is...

I tried to tear it apart, really I did.... :-)

All I can say is that this is great stuff. I really felt Ryoga's pain.
Everybody else seemed very well handled too. I'm still wondering (as is
Ryoga) what Nabiki is up to, but I'm sure we'll find out next time.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics