Looks like a fun story, although I can't quite see Tenchi deliberately
messing up the house for anyone :)

The Youshou-Ranma interaction was very nice, and everyone's reactions to
Ranma were very nicely done.  I hope this gets finished :)



John Walter Biles :  MA-History, Ph.D Wannabe at U. Kansas         
ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu       
rhea@tass.org              http://www.tass.org/~rhea/falcon.html
rhea@maison-otaku.net      http://www.maison-otaku.net/~rhea/

        Priss smiled.  "This is Admiral Priscilla S. Asagiri of House
Serenity.  Request permission to help you kick some giant monster
ass.  So did this thing crawl out of your garbage can or what, sis?  It
looks like some leftovers evolved into a new life form."

--Dance of Shiva, Chapter 19.