Ranma, startled by this reaction, walked up to Kasumi and gently took
hold
of her shoulders.  "Is something wrong, Kasumi?"  Ranma asked in a
concerned
voice.

The whole fanfic was strangely formatted on my end.  I would suggest
cutting down the wordwrap to about 65 characters per line.

I liked this.  At first, I thought you were going to do a lemon.  I was
pleasantly surprised when you didn't.

Wonderfully ambiguous ending.  :)

-- 
-Richard
sterman@sprynet.com

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