Subject: "BLACK MAGIC" FINAL PART (EXTREME LEMON)
From: fcasper
Date: 9/28/1997, 3:12 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

This story contains scenes of violence and sexual content.  If you don't
like this, don't read it.  If you do like it, you're a hentai!  ;p


FINAL PART....

(Scene opens where it left off, Sakura discovering Lum and Tsubame
together.)

Sakura: w...w..w..wh....Wh.....Wha...What...What?  (Sakura cannot even
speak, tears begin to stream down her face and she looks like she is
about to die of shock) What....(voice choked with tears and pure shock) 
WHAT....ARE YOU DOING!?!?!?

Tsubame: (In a perfectly calm voice) I just finished fucking Lum.  I
also fucked her yesterday along with Ami Sagawa in that bed over there
while she was tied up and covered with honey.  I made her cum so good.
(smiles) And then I brought Lum to climax.......

(Tsubame gestures his head to the first bed where Ami's cum stains are
still apparent.)

Tsubame: (Speaking very slowly) .......where you and Moroboshi and god
knows who else did the deed......And before Ami, I fucked Shinobu and
Ran as well.  (smiles) I even fucked Ryuunosuke in my bedroom and had
the other girls fuck each other while I watched.  (points at the
videocamera) It's all on tape if you want to watch it.

(Sakura hasn't said a word nor moved a muscle during this entire speech
and now that it is finished, Sakura's fingers begin to twitch and her
initial reason of pure shock was rapidly changing into PURE HATRED.  The
cause for this, besides Tsubame's cock being in Lum, is the empty bottle
of sex sake which Tsubame poured the rest into Lum.)

Sakura: YOU......YOU USED THE FORBIDDEN POWERS OF THE SAKE OF CARNAL
DESIRES!!!!

Tsubame: I prefer the term "Sex Sake" myself. 

Sakura: HOW...HOW...HOW COULD YOU!!!!!!! HOW!!!!!! YOU SICK SON OF A
BITCH!!!!!! 

Tsubame: (calm voice) How could you justify fucking a seventeen year old
boy just because you were drunk and didn't have full control of your
senses?

Sakura: WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT!!!!

Tsubame: DON'T BOTHER DENYING IT!!! (Walks over to her with Lum, his
cock still resting inside her as he is still holding her up under her
knees.)  MOROBOSHI TOLD ME THE WHOLE STORY ABOUT YOU AND THE ONE NIGHT
THAT STARTED IT ALL!!!

Sakura: (screams) LISTEN TO ME!!!! WHATEVER THAT IDIOT SAID ABOUT ME IS
A LIE!!!!!!!  IT ALWAYS IS A LIE!!! I TOLD YOU THAT A BILLION
TIMES......BUT THAT DOESN'T EXCUSE THIS!!!!  THIS IS THE MOST DISGUSTING
DISPLAY OF PERVERSION AND SIN I HAVE EVER SEEN IN MY LIFE!!!!! COMPARED
TO YOU ATARU IS A SAINT!!! AT LEAST HE DOESN'T TAKE ADVANTAGE OF GIRLS
BY GETTING THEM DRUNK ON THE SAKE OF CARNAL DESIRES OR SEX SAKE AS
YOU LIKE TO CALL IT AND THEN RAPES THEM. (Sakura points towards Lum and 
Lum sticks her tongue out at her.)

Tsubame: I DIDN'T RAPE ANYONE!!! THEY ALL DID IT WILLINGLY!!!

Sakura: YOU USED THE SAKE!!!! YOU ALTERED THEIR MINDS!!!

Tsubame: THEY WERE PLAYING OUT THEIR INNER FANTASIES!!!! I DIDN'T 
ALTER JACK!!!

Sakura: NO, YOU JUST INCREASED THEIR NORMAL FANTASIES ABOUT 900% 
ABOVE NORMAL!!!!!  ANYWAY,  THIS IS THE END TSUBAME!!!! I'M GOING
TO THE PRINCIPAL AND GETTING YOU THROWN IN PRISON!!! 

(Sakura spins on her heel, tears pouring down her face and starts to
leave when suddenly a bolt of lightning strikes above her head.  She
stops cold and turns around to see Tsubame, no longer inside of Lum, but
smiling behind the very dangerous ONI, whose yellow ribbon has just been
removed.

Lum: You're not going anywhere.

(Sakura eyeballs the door and considers diving for it but reconsiders
when Lum give Sakura her best *TRY ME* look.)

Tsubame steps behind Lum and crosses his hands on her stomach.  Lum
turns around and kisses him full on the mouth.  Tsubame loves every
moment of it as Sakura's tears continues to flow.)

Sakura: Why are you doing this?  What lie did Moroboshi tell you that
pushed you so far over the edge?

Tsubame: It's not a lie.

Sakura: What evidence did he give you?  What did he say about me?

Tsubame: He said you called him into this very office about a year ago
and he said you were drunk and dancing around the room topless!

Sakura: HE SAID WHAT!!!!!!!

Tsubame: Then he said he tried to help you and you ended up fucking him
on that bed!!! (point at the Ami's cum stained bed) several times and
from that point on whenever you got drunk you would fuck him in here!!!!

Sakura: Tsubame.......(crying)

Tsubame: I was loyal to you! I believed you when you said you had NO
interest in Ataru Moroboshi at all!  Even though I caught you and him
together more than a couple of times!

Sakura: Tsubame, I never.......NEVER...  

Tsubame: Even when the evidence was right in front of my face.....I
believed you because I loved you and I believed you loved me.....And now
I know it's all a lie!!! A horrible lie just to!!!! Well let satisfy
your desires!!! Now let me tell you something you cold hearted BITCH!!!
I seduced FIVE count them, FIVE teenage virgin schoolgirls in only three
days and now my vengeance is almost complete!!!

Sakura: Almost....?

Tsubame: Yes! Only one more thing remains....specifically, my revenge on
YOU.  

Sakura: NO!!! THAT'S NOT TRUE!!!!!! I NEVER CHEATED ON YOU!!!

Tsubame: SHUT UP!!! LUM, PUNISH HER!

(Lum sends a small bolt of lightning to strike Sakura who screams in
pain.)

Sakura: OOOWWWWW!!!! STOP IT PLEASE!! TSUBAME I SWEAR, I NEVER HAD AN
AFFAIR!!!! NOT WITH ATARU, NOT WITH MENDOU, NOT WITH ANYONE!!!

Tsubame: YEAH RIGHT!  THEN HOW DO YOU EXPLAIN ALL THE TIMES YOU AND 
MOROBOSHI WERE TOGETHER!!!! HUH!!! EXPLAIN THAT SAKURA!!!

Sakura: WE WEREN'T TOGETHER!  HE WOULDN'T LEAVE ME ALONE!!! 

Tsubame: I WILL HEAR NO MORE EXCUSES!!! LUM, PUNISH HER....UNTIL SHE IS
OUT COLD!!!

Lum: Yes, my darling.........DIVINE RETRIBUTION!!!

(Lum unleashes the full force of her lighting attack on Sakura who has
no way to block or dodge them and they strike her full force.)

Sakura: NOOOOOOOOO!!!! (Screams in pain) TSUBAME!!! PLEASE!!!!  LISTEN
TO ME!!!  IT'S ALL LIES!!!

(Lum continues to shoot bolts from her fingers while Tsubame places a
finger in Lum's pussy and moves it in and out.  The increased
stimulation increases the power of her shocks.  Sakura shrieks,
collapses to the ground and doesn't move.)

Tsubame: Well done Lum.  (Smiles at Tsubame)  It's time you paid for
*your* carnal sins, Sakura!

(Tsubame reaches into his pocket and pulls out a small vial.  He then 
goes to the refrigerator and pulls out the last bottle of sex sake which
is full as it has not been used.  He opens the bottle and empties the
vial into the bottle.)

Lum: What's that?

Tsubame: Heh heh heh....just a little something extra to make my revenge
all the more sweeter....Lum, Hand me that funnel.

(Lum passes the funnel to Tsubame and he sticks it into Sakura's mouth.)

Tsubame: Drink up bitch! Just like you did with Ataru!

(Tsubame pours some sake into the funnel and Sakura swallows it.)

Tsubame: Excellent.  Lum?

Lum: Yes, Darling?

Tsubame: Here's what I want you to do.  First, take off all of Sakura's
clothes.

Lum: Hai! 

(Lum mounts Sakura and rips open her blouse.  She then unhooks Sakura's
bra, revealing her full ripened breasts.  She then grabs the bottom of
Sakura's skirt and tears it in half from the bottom up until Sakura is
only clad in underwear.  Lum grabs the front of it and with a violent
jerk, rips it off.  Sakura is now completely nude. 

Tsubame: Good.  Now tie her spread eagled to the chair.

(Lum picks Sakura up in her arms and flies her over to the chair.  She
sits Sakura down on the chair and places each of her legs over an
armrest and then ties her legs to the arms of the chair.  Lum uses the
rest of the rope to firmly tie up Sakura's breasts, neck and criss
crossing over her body as well as her arms behind the back of the
chair.)

Tsubame: (smiles at Sakura) Don't you look sweet.  Tied up like a little
whore.

Lum: Are you going to fuck her?

Tsubame: HELL NO!!!  I've got a school full of horny students to do
that!  My revenge is now complete!  The vial I added to the sex sake
will make Sakura, completely insatiable.  No matter how many men she's
with, her lust will never be satisfied.  She'll spend the rest of her
life sleeping around, little good it will do her!  BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!   

(Tsubame turned to face Lum, who had a desperate look on her face.)

Lum: Please....fuck me again, darling.

Tsubame: (shaking his head)  I'm afraid not....You've served your
purpose by helping me hurt Sakura.  Now, I will release you and the
other girls from the effects of the sex sake so I can be with
Ryuunosuke.  

Lum: WHAT?!?  NO!!!!!

(Lum rushed towards him, hugging his knees crying and begging him not to
go.  Tsubame takes the opportunity to gently hit a pressure point on her
neck.  A moment later, Lum slumped to the floor, unconscious.)

Tsubame:  Forgive me, Lum....You truly are beautiful....but I can't
share my love for Ryuunosuke with you.  

(Tsubame takes the bottle of sex sake as he walked out the door of
Sakura's clinic.  There was a long pause as the camera zooms in on the
unconscious Lum.  Then Tsubame suddenly walked back in.

Tsubame: WHAT AM I?  CRAZY!?!?

(Tsubame giggled with mad glee as he quickly replaced Lum's tiger
striped bikini on her naked body and gathered her in his arms.  Holding
her close to him, Tsubame opened the window, looked around to make sure
no one was around, and climbed up on the windowsill, leaping down to the
ground.)  


*	*	*


(Meanwhile, back in the clinic)

Ataru: (groans as he rose to his feet.)  Uhhh....Anybody get the recipe
of that bender....WOAH! 

(Ataru gapes at the naked body of Sakura tied in the chair, as beautiful
and perfectly proportioned as he imagined.)

Ataru: SAKURA!!!  THE MOST REVERED PAIR OF HOOTERS!!!  I, MOROBOSHI
ATARU, CLASS PRESIDENT, STUDENT OF 17 YEARS......

(Sakura begins to stir with Ataru's loud proclamations.  Then she
notices Ataru drooling over her, staring into his lust-filled eyes. 
Surprisingly, she finds herself not bothered by this in the least.  In
fact....

Sakura: Ataru....

Ataru: H....Hai?

Sakura: Please....fuck me....

(Ataru shakes his head, rubs his eyes, and slaps himself silly before
composing himself once more and replying.

Ataru: Come again?

(She winked at him as she replied in a sexy whisper....)

Sakura:  I just might....If you fuck me.

(There was a loud sonic boom as Ataru broke the speed barrier rushing
over to his teacher.  His hands were everywhere at once, pawing,
caressing, groping, his tongue running over her sensitive anatomy and
drinking from her sweet treasure.  Sakura moaned with pleasure, begging
him for more, her body almost exploding from the pleasurable
sensations....)

Then Ataru positions himself in front of Sakura and enters her.  Sakura
starts to protest but the sake has now has sufficient time to increase
her desires and she moans with pleasure as Ataru fucks her in the chair,
his every thrust greeted with a moan of ecstasy.)

Sakura: UHHHHHHH....OHHHHHH.....YESSSSS....HARDER..........

Ataru: (smiles at Sakura)  You have NO idea how long I wanted to do
this....  

Sakura: I hope I can please you....Master.

(Ataru's reply had no words as she began moaning in pleasure as he
pumped his tool into Sakura.)

Sakura: YES!!! OHHHH GOD........MORE....I WANT
MORE......UHHHHHH.....AHHHHHH............UHHH....UHHHHHHHHH.....YES!!! 
OOOOOHHHH!!!! ATARU!!!! I WANT YOUR BONER!!!!

(Sakura’s entire body is drenched in sweat as she writhes in nothing but
pure pleasure as Ataru is having the time of his life.  He places his
hands on Sakura’s hooters and caresses them over and over.)

Ataru: UHHHHHH....SO TIGHT.....SO BIG......SO SOFT......SAKURA...YOU
LITTLE SLUT........

Sakura: YES!!! CALL ME A SLUT!!! TALK DIRTY TO ME!!!! UHHHHHH!!!

Ataru: ALL THE TIMES YOU WORE THAT TIGHT PURPLE DRESS....I FANTASIZED
ABOUT YOU SO MUCH.....YOU WANTED TO BE ADMIRED, DIDN’T YOU?  YOU WANTED
TO BE FUCKED BY ME!  YOU LITTLE SLUT......SCREAM OUT MY NAME.

Sakura: ATARU!!! ATARU!!! ATARU-KUN!!!

Ataru: SAY YOU WANT IT!!!  SAY YOU WANT ME TO MAKE YOU CUM!!!

Sakura: ATARU!!! UHHHHH!!! I WANT YOU TO MAKE ME CUM!!!!

Ataru: TELL ME HOW MUCH YOU WANT IT!!!

(Ataru continues to knead Sakura’s breasts and leaned over to slowly
swirl his tongue around her sensitive nipples as she screams) 

Sakura: I WANT IT!!!! I WANT YOU SO MUCH.....SO MUCH.....PLEASE!!!!

Ataru: I don’t think you’re ready yet? 

Sakura: I’M SITTING IN A FLOOD OF MY OWN JUICES AND YOU SAY I’M NOT 
READY?!?!?

Ataru: Let me check.

(Ataru moves his tongue downwards from Sakura’s breasts to her wet pussy
and proceeds to slurp up her juices.  Sakura shudders and moves her head
from side to side and gasps in pleasure as Ataru continues to tongue her
love petals.)

Ataru: AHHHH.....The pause that refreshes.

Sakura: UHHHHHHH....THERE!  LICK IT RIGHT THERE!!!

(Ataru sucks hard on Sakura’s button and Sakura lets loose a sigh as she
has an orgasm.  Ataru licks up some more and then once again thrusts his
penis hard into her.)

Sakura: YES!

(Ataru thrusts harder and faster and sweat flies off his forehead as he
tries to bring Sakura to climax again.)

Sakura: YES!!!!

(Ataru feels himself losing it)

Ataru: SA-KU-RAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!

Sakura: MO-RO-BO-SHI!!!!!!!!

Both: FUCK!!!

(Ataru cums over and over into Sakura as she lets loose a final scream
with her climax that echoes in the room.)

Sakura: YYYYYYYYYYESSSSSS!!!!!!


*	*	*


(Meanwhile at Tsubame's home, Ryuunosuke was sitting in the living room
watching an adult video and fingering herself.  Actually it was a video
of her soon-to-be husband making love to various schoolgirls in the
clinic.  She dreamed of Tsubame soon doing the same things to her and
having him all to herself....)

(Suddenly there was a frantic pounding at the door.  Ryunnonsuke quickly
composed herself and rushed to open the door.  She was shocked to see
Tusbame with Lum in his arms, looking concerned.)

Tsubame:  We have to leave soon.  My revenge is complete and it's only a
matter of time before the authorities figure out what I've done.

Ryuunosuke: O....Okay!  (she quickly runs upstairs to Tusbame's room.  A
moment later, she emerged with a couple of suitcases that she had packed 
for him the night before.)  Okay, we're all set!  But what about Lum? 
Why is she here?

Tsubame: She's coming with us.

Ryunnosuke: What!  B....But I thought....

Tsubame: (placing a hand on her cheek.) You'll always be the one I love,
Ryuu.  Lum is a sex toy for us, nothing more.     

Ryuunosuke: B...But....!

Tsubame: Look, we have a little time....Why don't we try her out and if
you don't like her, I'll release the spell on her and send her back. 
Okay?

Ryuunosuke: Well....okay.

Tsubame: Besides....(glances at the monitor with a smile)  I thought you
got turned on when I did it with other girls....

Ryuunosuke: (smiles)  I guess you caught me....

(Tsubame wrapped his arms around Ryunnosuke, giving her a long and
passionate kiss.  When they broke for air, they noticed Lum was starting
to stir.  Tsubame and Ryunnosuke looked at once another and grinned.)


*	*	*


(The sun was steadily rising as Tsubame, along with Ryuunosuke, were
riding together down the street on Sakura's motorcycle, Lum following
from the air.  A new chapter of Tsubame's life was about to begin and he
was looking forward to it....)

Ryuunosuke: Tsubame?

Tsubame: Yes, Ryuu?

Ryuunosuke: Where are we going to stay until I turn 18 and you can marry
me?

Tsubame:  We'll eventually be leaving the country.  But first, there's a
few things I have to do.  There's an old friend of mine who gave me an
open offer to stay at his home whenever he likes in exchange for ridding
his home of a demon a while back.

Ryuunosuke: Oh really?  What is this place?

(As Tsubame changed lanes through the early morning traffic, Ryuunosuke
failed to hear his answer.  

Ryunnosuke: Come again?

Tsubame: I said, The Tendo Dojo!  

Ryuunosuke: Oh....

(The trio continued towards their destination, unaware of the chaos they
had yet to create....)


EPILOGUE


- Ran, Shinobu and Ami were devastated over the disappearance of their
master.  Fortunately, or unfortunately, depending on how you look at it,
Ataru managed to clone the little sex sake he had left with Ran's
advanced alien technology and the girls ended up being complete devoted
to him.  

- Ami and Ataru were married later but continued to keep their sexual
relationship open with other people.  Ataru used the cloned sex sake
many times, eventually building the harem he had dreamed of all his
life.

- The Mendou family became the subject of much controversy after a
photograph of Ryoko giving a blowjob to her brother was anonymously
released to the press.  Mendou ended up fleeing Japan but his sister
remained, taking the reins of the Mendou fortune and occasionally
knocking boots with Ataru.

- Mr. and Mrs. Moroboshi found themselves getting along a lot better
since they agreed to see other people.  They celebrated a nice second
honeymoon in America, staying in separate rooms with their chosen
partners, Ami and Rei.     

- Onsen-Mark became the sex toy of Sakura after being clonked on the
head and administered the sex sake.  He soon died of a heart attack
after repeatedly being brought to climax by an insatiable Sakura.

- Sakura became the school sex toy.  Not surprisingly, thanks to the sex
sake, she loved every minute of her new job.  While she was never
completely satisfied, she knew it could have been worse.

- Megane immediately went searching for Lum after learning of her fate.
He went alone since the stormtroopers were content with asking favors of
Sakura....

- Cherry never came back to Tomobiki....


THE END


Well, it's done.  Hope you liked it.  I rewrote the original ending
because I felt it was a bit too grim and didn't really fit the overall
mood of the story.  I'll include the original ending here for those of
you who are interested.  C&C on both endings are welcome.  :)

Sincerely,

Megane 6.7


THE ALTERNATE ENDING....


Tsubame: Now you will act like the slut you have become!  Lum, Hand me
that funnel.

(Lum passes the funnel to Tsubame and he sticks it into Sakura's mouth.)

Tsubame: Drink up bitch! Just like you did with Ataru!

(Tsubame is about to pour some sake into the funnel when......)

Voices: SAKURA-SENSEI!!!!!

(A metal fist smashed through the door and ripped it off it's hinges. 
Megane, wearing his heavy duty Mobile Suit, rushed into the room with
his machine gun drawn followed by his Stormtroopers.)

Megane: LUM-SAN!!!!!

(Lum looks over to glare at the Stormtroopers.)

(Megane sees Lum's condition and give Tsubame a LOOK that could melt
lead)

Megane: YOU SON OF A BITCH!!!! GET HIM!!!!!!!

(The Stormtroopers all charge Tsubame at once but are stopped short by
Lum's blast)

Lum: (Evil voice) YOU WILL NOT HURT MY DARLING.

(Megane kneels over by Sakura)  

Megane: Are you all right Sakura-Sensei?

(Sakura does not respond)

Shutaro: (pointing to Chibi and Kakugari) Get Sakura out of here! Perm
and I will take care of Tsubame!!!

Chibi and Kakugari: Roger!

(They carry her outside the office)

Tsubame: MEGANE!!! HOW DARE YOU INTERFERE!!!! LUM....

Megane: HOLD IT!  (points at Tsubame) I challenge you to a duel Tsubame!

Tsubame: (amused) Is that so?

Lum: Let ME blast him Darling!

 Tsubame: No! Megane is MINE!!!  (looks at Megane)  I accept your
challenge! Meet me on the roof!  Lum, stay here until I call for you.  
(Tsubame leap upwards and disappears into the ceiling like a ghost)

Megane: Holy.......(looks at a slightly burnt Perm) Are you all right?

Perm: I'm fine.....just a little pissed that's all.....(looks at Lum who
is now motionless)

Megane: Perm?

Perm: Hai?

Megane: Keep an eye on Lum while I fight Tsubame!

Perm: Roger!

(Megane and Shutaro glance at each other, sigh, and rush out of the
room.) 

(Scene cuts to the roof of Tomobiki School.  It is pouring rain.  Megane
and Perm enter to see Tsubame standing off to one side.)

Perm: (calling out to him) It's all over Tsubame!  You might as well
give up now!

Tsubame: Give up? No. I don't think so.

Megane: It's TWO against ONE. You can't win.

Ryuunosuke: Not exactly.

(Megane and Perm turn to see Ryuunosuke standing behind them)

Perm: (smiles) HAH! Now's it THREE against....

Megane: Perm! LOOK.....

(Before Megane can finish his sentence, Ryuunosuke punches him in the
gut, sending him to his knees.)

Megane: (coughing up blood) WHY......

Ryuunosuke: Tsubame will have his revenge.  I'm here to make sure YOU
don't interfere.

Megane: Is that a fact?

(Megane legsweeps Ryuunosuke, sending her crashing to the ground.  While
Megane and Ryuunosuke duke it out, Shutaro faces off against Tsubame.  
The camera show a letterbox format for a few moments as Shutaro and
Tsubame stand ready to fight.  Then the camera returns to normal as
Shutaro rushes Tsubame with his sword.)

Shutaro: This time you DIE for sure!!! KIIIYAAAA!!! 

(Mendou swipes at Tsubame only to find his sword has vanished from his
hands, Shutaro looks around wildly and then Tsubame pulls it out of his
cape and shows it to a shocked Shutaro.)     

Tsubame: The hand is quicker than the eye my weak, tired friend.

(Tsubame slashes the sword at Shutaro.  Shutaro tries to dodge but gets
stabbed deeply in the left leg drawing blood.  Shutaro cries out in pain
and slowly starts to back away from Tsubame.)

Shutaro: Something's wrong.  Tsubame has never been THAT strong
before.....(thinks) It's his rage.....His rage makes him strong......

(Cut to the other fight on the roof.  Megane misses a round kick on
Ryuunosuke and she smashes him in the face with both her fists.  Megane
tries to leg sweep her again but she jumps over it.)

Ryuunosuke: Ryuu must be under the control of that sake Mendou was
talking about.  How can I stop her without hurting her?  (While he
ponders this question Ryuu takes the opportunity to belt Megane again
sending him skirting near the edge of the roof.)

Megane: (spiting out a tooth) I swear.....If I manage to get out of this
alive.....I will PERSONALLY rip out Ataru's lungs and feed them to
him!!!  He's responsible for this whole damn mess...

(Megane catches one of Ryuunosuke's punches, much to her surprise.)

Megane: That stupid jerk MOROBOSHI!! 

(Megane kicks at Ryuunosuke driving her back towards the middle of the
roof)

Megane: AND NOW.....THANKS TO HIM......LUM WAS....WAS....ASSAULTED.

(Megane's fury reaches a raging boil and with one mighty punch, he
knocks Ryuu against the wall and she slumps to the ground.  Megane
stares at his fist in amazement.)

Megane: (Smiling) Wow.  Rage really does increase your strength!  

(Megane looks over to see a beaten and bloody Mendou trying to hold off
Tsubame, who somehow got his sword away from him and is slashing him at
will.)

Megane: Uh oh......(shouting) Hey Tsubame over here!

(Tsubame glances over at Megane and goes insane when he sees Ryuunosuke
collapsed against the wall.)

Tsubame: HOW DARE YOU HURT MY FINANCE!!!!!

Megane: Finance?  (looks at Ryuu and notices a ring on her finger) Oh
no! You didn't!

(Tsubame stalks Megane and drives him back toward the edge of the roof
with Mendou's sword)

Tsubame: NOW YOU....HIM..(GESTURES AT A HALF DEAD MENDOU).....SAKURA,
AND ALL THE REST OF YOU SHALL DIE!!!

Megane: (glancing over the edge with fear) You don't need to do this! 
You and Sakura can work it out!

Tsubame: NEVER!!! (raises the sword to kill Megane)

Sakura: TSUBAME.

(Tsubame spins around just in time to receive a gunshot wound in the
chest.  Tsubame stumbles and falls off the roof, and with a sickening
crunch, he hits the ground.  He twitches for a moment and then Tsubame
Ozuno calms down once and for all.)  

(Sakura lowers the shotgun, with smoke coming out of the barrel, a
single tear slowly runs down her cheek and she says in a choked
whisper.)

Sakura: The engagement is off.

(Megane rises to his feet) 

Megane: Sakura....Are you okay?

Sakura: I.....OH GOD WHY?

(Sakura sobs uncontrollably and Megane tries to comfort her.)

Megane: We'd better get some help for Shutaro.....

(Megane and Sakura walk over to Shutaro)

(Fade to Black)


EPILOGUE

(The scene opens in a graveyard) Ryuunosuke is walking through it,
carrying a bunch of flowers.  Her voice-over is heard as she continues
to walk through the graveyard.)

Ryuunosuke: (Voice-over)  It's been ten days since Tsubame died.  I
really miss him a lot...before he went crazy that is......It's hard to
believe what he did to all of us and all because of that son of a bitch
Moroboshi!  Thanks to Ataru's lies, Ami, Shinobu, Ran, Lum and me will
never be the same again!  Shutaro's still in the hospital from his
injuries, Onsen-Sensei....(gaze hardens) at least THAT pervert is
getting what he deserves!   Banned from teaching for life and under
arrest for the statuary rape of Ami and Ran.  It's all Ataru's fault and
they forgive him because he was under the power of the sake even though
he wasn't when he told the lie in the first place!!!      

(Ryuunosuke walks through the graveyard until she reaches Tsubame's
grave.  Ran, Ami and Shinobu are already standing there with their heads
bowed.)

Ryuunosuke: Why are you all here?

Ran: Paying respect to the dead.  Or should I say the BRAIN dead.

Ryuunosuke: (eyes burning with anger)  How dare you say that!  It was
all Moroboshi's fault!  If he hadn't told Tsubame that filthy lie.....

Shinobu:  (interrupting)  Tsubame still would have gone over the edge. 
Ataru did us all a favor by triggering it now BEFORE Sakura got married
to him.

Ryuunosuke: (eyes filling with tears) How can you be so fucking cold....

Ami: (looks sympathetic)  I hate to talk badly about the dead but
Tsubame was a disturbed person.  Even if Ataru hadn't said anything to
him, Tsubame would have eventually gone insane.  A normal person, not
even someone who feels their being cheated on, react by drugging
underage virgin schoolgirls to have sex with him to ease the pain.  Have
a affair with another WOMAN maybe, but not the way he did it.  

Shinobu: He had evil desires and used Moroboshi's lies as a excuse to
carry them out.  Tsubame WAS insane and it was only a matter of time. 
I'm sorry to be so blunt, but it's the plain and simple truth.  There
was nothing you could have done for him.  Rationally, Tsubame died a
long time ago.

Ryuunosuke: I can't believe that! (tears flowing) He...He was my best
friend......My only true friend.....(voice breaks with sobs) I......I
loved him.......

(Ryuunosuke cries hard and the girls held her while looking down at
Tsubame's grave, dispite their ordeal feeling a sense of loss....)


(Cut to Ataru's house.  Ataru and Lum are both watching TV  They both
look very uncomfortable and are on the verge of speaking several times
but then say nothing.  Lum finally says....

Lum: I guess it's not so easy to forget after all.....

Ataru: I know.......It all seems like a dream.

Lum: (starting to cry)  Oh Darling.....I'm so sorry.......I'm sorry I
couldn't give my virginity to you....

Ataru: Don't be......I was just as bad as you.  Neither of us had any
control.  No one is to blame except Tsubame and now he's gone for good.

Lum: I know.  I keep telling myself that......It just feels so
strange....Even though I hate him for what he's done....Part of me is
sad that he's gone....

Ataru: Thank god there was a cure for the (winces) sex sake.  You
know.....Two weeks ago I would have used sake like that to build a harem
but now......Now I know better.

Lum: (smiles a bit)  Does that mean you're going to stop girl chasing?

Ataru: Don't push your luck! (Lum frowns and Ataru quickly changes his
tune) Just kidding!

Lum: (frown disappears) Darling....You tease!

(Ataru and Lum kiss softly on the lips for a long moment and then....)

Lum: (eyes shining) Darling?

Ataru: Yes Lum?

Lum: Let us be one......now and forever.

Ataru: As you wish. (shudders as he remembers who last spoke THOSE
words) I mean.......Yes, I would love to.  

(Lum and Ataru embrace.)


THE END.


(I dunno....just seemed too pat and grim, don't you think?)