Subject: Re: [FFML] [Ranma][Fanfic]Wasurerarenai, part 8
From: KLEPPE@execpc.com (Gary Kleppe)
Date: 9/28/1997, 12:18 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

On Sun, 28 Sep 1997 09:32:54 -0400, Emily Siazon
<emily9@bellatlantic.net> wrote:

    "I bet you don't even know what Martial Arts Rythmic Gymnastics
Rhythmic

    The two teenagers looked up and found Ryoga standing a block
away facing the opposite direction.

Heh. Ryoga's taking lessons from Mousse. :-)

    "She's improved a lot," Ryoga answered proudly before being
beaned on the head by a stray club.

<chuckle>

    "...Of course, I don't think a bit more practice would hurt,"
Ryoga continued meekly before he passed out.

Question is, did she do that intentionally?

    Hearing her call, her pet piglet ran into the room. An annoyed
figure in a leotard muttered curses that would make a sailor blush as

Sailor Moon? She probably blushes pretty easily. :)

    The girl started to twirl her ribbon as she announced, "I'm
Kodachi, The Black Rose. I am the rising young star of the rythmics
rhythmic

    Unfortunately for P-chan, the movement caused the chain to jerk
around wildly. He only had time to let out a terrified bwee before he
smacked into Kodachi's head, effectively knocking her unconscious.

That didn't take long...

    When he woke up, he was pleasantly surprised to smell Katsudon 
being cooked for lunch.

"Oh my! I found this delicious black piglet!"

    Seeing his questioning glance, Kasumi apologized. ""Sorry, Ranma.
Extra quote there.
I accidentaly spilled a cup of water on myself this morning."
accidentally. (Wonder what her curse is? ;-))

A good chapter; kind of short, but some funny slapstick in it.

I don't get it. All I said was that the geese from Fly Away Home would 
make tasty lunch specials and suddenly everyone thinks I'm sadistic.
Nah, we thought that all along. :-P


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics