I merely split the first part into two parts, part three Redemption is
the final part so you dont have to go wading through the first two parts
to find the conclusion if you have already read it.  The first two parts
are mostly unchanged.

--Eric
-- 
"I always hated stories that ended poorly. I
always felt cheated.  But you can't feel cheated
forever.  And then she woke up...
I suppose there are worse endings."
--Rose Walker, Lost Hearts
http://www.erols.com/eda104/