After some thought and some c&c on the ending of Insignificant i decided
to do a minor rewrite on teh ending. Ukyou's change of heart no longer
seems to occur for no particular reason. I'm also releasing it in three
parts, Part I - Loss, Part II - Desperation, Part III - Redemption.
This is hopefully the finally version. Thanks to those who helped me
with nasty things like grammar and stuff.
--Eric
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"I always hated stories that ended poorly. I
always felt cheated. But you can't feel cheated
forever. And then she woke up...
I suppose there are worse endings."
--Rose Walker, Lost Hearts
http://www.erols.com/eda104/