Subject: [C&C] Re: [FFML] BSSR #18 alpha
From: "Ranma Al'Thor" <ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu>
Date: 9/25/1997, 3:19 PM
To: Fanfic ML

On Wed, 24 Sep 1997, Stephen Tsai wrote:


Ranma:  [Confidently.]  Joubu joubu daijoubu!  No one in that school's
smart enough to figure it out.

***Quit changing this back to "Heiki"!
***I said "Joubu..." is OK!

You might want to cut out your internal discussion comments before you
post drafts to the FFML :)
 

[Cut to the next day.  At Fuurinkan high, the students quickly

should be
Fuurinkan High 
or
Fuurinkan high school

Kodachi:  [Outloud to herself.]  Tsukino Ranko!  [Clenches

Out loud to herself.

***I'll go ahead and use what you have now, but
***I will want to mention it to the ML.

I think the Bandai suing is pretty funny :)


***I also still think having a more private
***ending with Ranma and Nabiki would be more
***poignant.

I'd agree.
 

John Walter Biles :  MA-History, Ph.D Wannabe at U. Kansas         
ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu       
rhea@tass.org              http://www.tass.org/~rhea/falcon.html
rhea@maison-otaku.net      http://www.maison-otaku.net/~rhea/

      It sought to scour him to ash, but he would not burn.  It tried to 
crush him, but he would not be broken.  It tried to blow him away, but he 
would not move.  He locked his mind around it and struck back with his 
anger, binding it with the power within himself.  He had gone beyond 
rage, into the calm at the heart of the hurricane of his anger.  By 
turning his anger outward, he mastered it, and now he did the same for 
the power.

                                   --from 'Power', the first third of my
unfinished story, 'Parallel Lives'.