A very well done short little story.  Far be it from me to comment on
characterization though i felt that Akane's reaction to the whole thing
might have been a bit understated.  

I liked th ending as well, though I wonder if poor Ranma will be
traumatized.  

Even so the story left me a bit sad in her own way Ukyou deserved better
then this odd sort of marriage she recieved in the end.

ahh well

nicely done

--Eric
-- 
"I always hated stories that ended poorly. I
always felt cheated.  But you can't feel cheated
forever.  And then she woke up...
I suppose there are worse endings."
--Rose Walker, Lost Hearts
http://www.erols.com/eda104/