On Tue, 23 Sep 1997, Ranma Al'Thor wrote:

On Tue, 23 Sep 1997, R. D. Beaubien wrote:

What I found a bit confusing was the parts involving Madigan. Just why did
the new Pluto decide that she need to saved. All we found of that was she

She had use for her talents at the time of the fall of the Crystal
Millenium (The section at the end, see Pluto's reference to her 'Inner
Senshi' :))

What, you mean I have to reread it again....:P Okay, you can write my Chem
Lab up while I read the fic Okay...:)

No, that's something I have to fix from the first draft.  I was pretty
worn out as I finished off the last chapter and a few subplots slipped
through my fingers.

Ahh...Just figrued I point it out to you anyway. With a story of that size
you sometimes do lose track of the sub plots, and I assumed this was a
rather important one (Goto-san is always involved in an important sub plot
some where along the line...)
 

Thanks :)

No problem...Now I've got to get to work on some fanfic...Man, I've left
Natsumi alone for 6 months now...Not good...:|

Hmm..Just remembered one small question I need to ask you. When
Kumagami-san started talking about her past boyfriends, you didn't talk
about Utsumi/Richard Won. Did you leave this out on purpose, or did she
leave it on purpose? Or am I missing something in the Patlabor
timeline...(Never heard of Daisuke before....)

Ja ne!!

Richard Beaubien (Who's wondering what the Chinese word for completion is,
so he can start pre-planning out a Patlabor fic going into the
relationship of Richard Won/Utsumi and Takeko Kumagami)
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