Yikes!  Now there are two stories that put Ranma and Nodoka together! 
The horror!  THE HORROR!!

Just kidding.  Actually your continuation was very creative and unique.
Having Ranma use the spring water on her was a nice touch.  It was well
written and I liked it.  Keep up the good work. 

Sincerely,

Megane 6.7

P.S. Anybody up to writing a lemon continuation for this?  ;)

Ranma's hand slowly crept up the inside of Nodoka's high as the middle aged
woman closed her eyes and let the sensations overwhelme her senses. Her
breathing came in tiny gasps as Rnama's hand moved further up the interior of
her leg. 

"I want to see youl, mom...I mean Nodoka"


Eek...I can't go through with it....

-OneShot
Jeffrey Keith Wong: jeffwong@li.net
http://www.rit.edu/~jkw7063/fanfic/index.htm
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The latter site has been updated on Sept 22nd.