Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic][rough] Ranma: Ad Infinitum
From: Richard Lawson
Date: 9/22/1997, 1:03 AM
To: Natsume Atsuko
CC: fanfic@fanfic.com

This story is *neat*.  ^_^

I like the first ending better.  Never seen that idea before.  And
that's good - a true rarity in Ranma fanfiction.

As for a way to suggest that this has all happened many times before,
how about something like this:


The ceremony progressed rapidly, as all the trappings of Western
religion were absent, leaving only the wedding. 

The minister was about to ask Ranma for his vows when it happened.
A soft thud in the back of the chapel.  A louder <BANG>.  Then the inner
door smacked open.  <SLAM!>  "RANMA SAOTOME!  HOW DARE YOU..."

The gathered guests all sighed.  Soun covered his eyes and shook his
head.  Nabiki opened her ledger book and added a tally stroke halfway
down a page.  Nodoka rubbed her temples with her forefingers, mumbling
under her breath.

Ranma gave his bride a weak smile.  Akane giggled, and patted his
shoulder.  "Next time."


I do have to say that this is one of the better one-page fanfics I've
ever seen.  Proof that brevity does not mean an absence of an original,
well-presented, *finished* story.  :)

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