Subject: Re: [FFML] (essay) Alternative Universe Stories
From: Eric Adams
Date: 9/19/1997, 5:27 PM
To: Gary Kleppe <KLEPPE@execpc.com>, FFML <fanfic@fanfic.com>
Reply-to:
eric.adams@decisionone.COM, eda104@erols.com

Gary Kleppe wrote:

On Thu, 18 Sep 1997 18:37:31 -0500 (CDT), Scott Jamison
<majks@cyberx.com> wrote:

1. THE PREMISE. As Scott said, you start from a basic idea or "what-if".
These can range from simple (e.g. "What if Ranma had been engaged to
Kasumi instead of Akane?") to much more complicated stuff. Generally,
the simpler the basic idea is, the easier the story will be for the
readers to get a handle on; Though I don't doubt that complicated
premises can be done successfully, they take more work.

Consistency in a premise is a good thing IMO. If character X's tendency
to glomp women for comedic effect in the original makes him a sadistic
rapist in your story, and if character Y does the same thing in the
original, then the premise should apply to Y too -- even if Y is your
favorite character.

but thats not necessarily true.  difference choices can make all the
difference.  In fact sometimes drawing sharp contrasts to two similiar
characters helps better define them.  If Y is your favorite character
you're going to cast Y in the best possible light.  *ponder* In other
words you're going attempt to define Y clearer then X.  Since Y will be
a more defined and multi faceted character then X she will obviously
have more choices availabe.




      Well, I hope this essay has been useful to you, or at least not
too boring.
I hope the same for this addition.

i have one question what about future stories?  They are almost
alternate universe stories as well.

--Eric
 
Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics

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