At that moment, the Preist of the temple came in with a waterskin.

   Should be "Priest"

     She immediately walked up to the Preist.  "I  am Funaho," She said
with a very magestic and soothing voice, "you have done well in guarding

   Majestic? And in this case I wouldn't use soothing voice - ethereal
voice?

the device.  However, we must take it home with us for a time.  It shall
be returned to you when the time is right, but we cannot have it falling
into the wrong hands as your world increases its technology."
     The Preist looked about ready to complain, but seemed to loose his
internal conflict, and just nodded.

   "break out of his internal conflict". 
   BTW I recall that the priest actually did say a few lines during the 
movie instead of just being a side character like that artist fellow. 

     Funaho walked passed the gawking Dr. Scott with nary a glance,
proceeding to the wall he had so recently been translating.  She pressed
her hand on the rock.  Millions of tiny multicolored lights flowed from

   I'd think she'd use some sort of magic spell instead of just pressing
her hand on the rock. Something like Urd, perhaps? Lots more flash and
bang. Gods, I've been playing too much FF7...

That was the Prologue.  I really didn't know what the heck this would
exactly turn out like when I started writing.  Well, if you like it,
please say so.  Send comments, in other words.  Thank you.
PMasters    

   Some comments:

   I like. ^_^ Continue with the plot please.

   This sort of movie should have the John Woo touch. The star 
with twin machine pistols held sideways jumping from the upper deck of 
the pleasure ship firing at those aliens (forgot the names)?

   Tenchi as a retired <SOLDIER> masquerading as a taxi driver? Nah,
can't see that. Ranma, on the other hand, with the big mouth and fancy
martial arts skills...

   Jah,

   Andrew

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   Andrew Sak, Product Dev. Quality Engineer
      Intel Technology Sdn. Bhd. Penang Malaysia

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 girls who hate boys...
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                                          Summer '97 Remix