i like the additions.. do you plan on continueing this?  Ranma's
reaction to his death still seems a bit understated.  Shampoo's
blindness was interesting.

Ukyou however well, you'd think she might've known but then again
anyways, i wish you would expound on her encounter with ranma since she
probably has more reason than any to hate Genma.

Genma has to be one of the most despicable characters in ranma in my
opinion.  But seeing how each of the characters would deal with it and
now that ranma has to face his curse and his mother alone makes this a
very interesting story.

Hope you finish it.

--Eric

ps. this is late i realize, but i'm going through my backlog today,
sorry



-- 
"I always hated stories that ended poorly. I
always felt cheated.  But you can't feel cheated
forever.  And then she woke up...
I suppose there are worse endings."
--Rose Walker, Lost Hearts
http://www.erols.com/eda104/