I like Robert Morrison's other work. In fact I have never found one I
didn't like until now. I just don't like this combination of stories. i
will continue to read it in the hope it will improve but so far all he
has done is a story with somebody else with the same curse as Ranma
doing the first part of the story. 

In fairness, I should add I have never seen or read EVA. Then again I
had never even heard of BGC when i read Twister's version and I liked
it very much. It got me to read several other BGC fanfics such as Ed
Becerra's and Charles Stitman's and finally got me to rent the video's
(or at least try- they were out when I got there)

This one just doesn't draw me into the world, I have no feeling for the
main character other than it ( not the term I would use for most
aquatransexuals) seems fairly uncaring and heartless.

Rick Robinson

rik@cfanet.com.com 

Rick Robinson

rik@cfanet.com