<SNIP!>

Like the premise, -love- the execution---Genma seeing various darkfic
outcomes (most of which I recognize, but I'm sure I missed at least one) is
probably the best vision of horrible things to come yet realized...

Can't say I caught the point of the squirrel & walnut game, but my REALLY
big problem with this fic, no big offense, honest, is the seemingly endless
host of author-created characters.  I rarely skim fics, but I didn't read
the ACC sections after the first couple---they were distracting from the
far more engaging idea of Genma trying to avoid letting himself and his son
become rotten, maniacal jerks.  <shrug>  IMO, of course.

---Addison