Okay, in the attached file you will find my very first fanfic attempt. I just
have a few things to say beforehand. First PLEASE send C&C. I CANNOT find
fault in my own writing, I need others to do so. Whether it's grammer,
content, you just didn't like it, whatever, please send it.
A note to flamers: If you don't have something constructive to say,
don't say anything at all. I have no tolerance for flames. I have ways of
retaliating, so DON'T DO IT. I don't care how abusive you are, as long as you
have something to say, but no pure flame.
Next: I toss in two references to other people's fics. Nothing
major, no names, no titles, no infringement beyond the simple reference to
better serve my story. I haven't been here that long, so i'm not familiar
with the unspoken rules.This could be the kind of thing that's winked at or
something that will get me kicked off the list and made a fandom barukumin
for all eternity. Yes, I could have asked first, but i'm operating on the
assumption that it's easier to beg forgiveness than to ask permission. I
apologize to the authors in advance if i've offended.
I know i'm longwinded. Almost done.
Lastly, this is headed for RAAC, so once again PLEASE send C&C.
Also, if you want to be a prereader for upcoming parts send word, but I can't
gaurantee you'll get stuff before this list {i'm on a bit of a shoestring}
Oh, and I know the title has almost certainly been used before, but it fit
best of anything I could think up.
Now, on with the Fic!!
-Matthew Giglia, the
Magnificient Mr.Bean-
ÿWPCE BEEN KICKING AROUND FOR AWHILE.
GO ON.
WE GIVE EVERYBODY WHAT THEY WANT.
WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING...OH HO. I SEE. BUT WOULDN’T THAT MEAN USING THE-
QUIET, FOOL!!!! YOU NEVER KNOW WHO MIGHT BE LISTENING. AND YES, WE WOULD HAVE TO USE *IT.* IT WORKED LAST TIME, DIDN’T IT?
YES, BUT THIS TIME WE COULDN’T USE IT ON THE OUTSIDE. WE’D HAVE TO BRING IT HERE AND GROUND IT SOMEWHERE, AND THAT MAKES US VULNERABLE. NEED I MENTION THOSE TWO WHO COULD POSSIBLY DEFEAT US?
WHAT ABOUT THEM? THE ONE HAS NO CLUE THAT HE MIGHT BE OUTSIDE OUR CONTROL, AND HE CAN’T EVEN TAP THE TALENT. THE OTHER USES WHAT PALTRY CONTROL THEY MANAGED TO SCROUNGE UP WITHOUT EVEN KNOWING WHAT THEY ARE DOING. THESE PEOPLE WILL NEVER KNOW WHAT HIT THEM.
YOU COULD BE RIGHT IN MORE WAYS THAN ONE. WHAT ABOUT THE POSSIBILITY OF CASCADE FAILURE? ALL OF THEM COULD BE RIPPED APART AND SCATTERED TO ENDS OF TIME.
ALL LIFE IS RISK, AT LEAST FOR THEM.
WELL....OKAY, LET’S GIVE IT A GO. SAY, YOU HUNGRY?
I COULD EAT.
End Chapter One.
-I tried to make this whole thing as sterotypically Ranma as possible, to set up for the “voices” at the end. The interesting stuff comes later. PLEASE send C&C. Also, credit where credit is due: There is a reference to Ranma 2096 and Converging series in here. My apologies to the fine authors of these two if I have offended.