Harold Ancell responded (privately, I might add, but for the sake of those
who've followed the story, I'm going public):

I hope that whoever's been reading will not find it TOO complicated, or
too dragging,

Dragging, no---it's too terse for that.

	True.  I'm planning to cover ten to sixteen years of change for 11
characters within at most 60 KB.

Confusing and complicated---yes; and too confusing for me to follow.  And
I both like and can follow Evangelion, including the last two TV episodes.

	This comment scares me.  And it isn't the first of its kind I've 
gotten.

So you may want to do something about this---draw a roadmap first, fill
in the narrative/plot gaps, something....

	The sad thing is that I have a loose plot map for the characters.
	The main mistake that I probably have committed is that I've put
out two consecutive out-of-sequence chapters.  Mousse's origin story 
didn't tie in with Ukyo's reading the letter from Ranma, and didn't tie
in with what had happened to Akane.  Also, Ukyo's scene doesn't completely
tie-in with Ukyo's story either.
	So, I'm changing strategy a bit.  I'm going to finish the One Man's
Dream storyline first, with a few of the already posted chapters 
repositioned, and to try to fill in any gaps which would occur.  Since
there will be more changes from the original Ranma storyline, aside from
Ranma getting stuck in China, and Mousse being the son of the Gambling 
King, I hope that these can be placed in a logically-sound manner.
	For now, the chapters will be rearranged as follows:

		What if...?
		Akane's Story
		Ukyo's Tale
		Ryoga's Journal
		Mousse's Misery
		Nerima's Pride
		Kuno's Day
		Ranma's End

	If need be, I'll add a few more chapters.  When I do finish, I'll 
post it part by part.
	Thanks to you all!  ^_^

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