Mark Doherty wrote:
I'm Here to Help
by Mark Doherty(mdoherty@mailbox.uq.edu.au)
Chapter 1 (of ?)
I must admit, when I started reading this story, I didn't expect much.
Suffice to say that I was pleasantly surprised.
The perspective of this story was quite interesting... the main
character feels to me very much alive, and real, even though exceedingly
little is revealed about him. The emotions felt are real, and can even
be identified with to an extent... one empathizes with him.
The respect shown for Sailor Moon (who he obviously has not connected
to Serenity) is another nice touch. The character is clearly not
omniscient.
I recommend this story to those of you who haven't read it. I didn't
expect to read past the first few paragraphs, but once I got into I just
couldn't stop... I had to finish. Almost made myself late to work that
way, too.
I look forward to the story's continuation.