Hey kids, it's UY and so I gotta comment.



So if you want all your nits picked, don't write Ranma, t'cha?



>From fcasper@yesic.com

Lum stands over by him

Weak, either stands near him or hovers over him would be much clearer.

are all sitting around Ataru's desk talking to

one another and flirting with Lum

I guess she is literally hovering over him then, so the gang's got her

encircled.

Shutaro and Shinbou are snuggling in a corner, almost making out

What part of the series is this?  Shutaro was never that interested in

She-hulk.

This goes on

for a while when Onsen-Mark comes into the room.

The events occur only during that one instant while he is crossing the

doorstep?  Do these occurances cease when he enters or sometime

afterwards?

not noticing the shape of the

class.

It's kinda box-shaped teach, with a door and some windows.  The students

are in terrible shape, what with all that light night studying.

What the hell is a Purse Off Fist!  Some kind of Martial Art

Technique?

It's part of Bimbo-fu. (Shameless plug)

Stormtroopers and Mendou.

I thought Vanity was preoccupied with Rage and didn't care what Lust and

Jealousy did?  (And these four are the heros of the series!)

They both lean over to kiss each other,

..

Were you really about to

kiss me in front of the class.

Hello?  That first sentence says they completed the action.



BTW: Does Lum really talk like that, t'cha?  (Think TV announcerette)

look as serious as possible as he starts speaking

Hopefully he won't strain his face again.

(write on paper)

This notation is getting very irritating.

May lightning strike me

if I'm lying. (winces as he thinks of Lum)

I think he's rather acclimated to lightning by now.  Thunder on the other

hand...

Sakura: (holding Shutaro) You're soooo much better.......

Have Tsubame and Sakura ever really done it?

fact you've made us 45 minutes late for math class.....

You should see Class 3-B.  This situation would have a teacher waiting at

the door to enter and teach the class.  The students have the same desk

all day long.

Teacher: (voice)

There are several possibilities here, name one.



	Henry J. Cobb	hcobb@slip.net          http://www.io.com/~hcobb