I have planned out the stories for first couple of chapters and will 
post them as soon as I write,, I will check for spelling, and grammer, 
as far as I'm able to. I'll start the rewriting on tuesday, as i have a 
paper due on monday,
thanks to all that responed , and wanted to be prereaders for my story
please send all comments and responds to Ali-Sama@geocities.com
since, for some reason I don't frequntly get the messages from the 
mailing list, chances are I won't get the message unless i get it 
directly, thanks


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