On Mon, 8 Sep 1997, Chris Davies wrote:

	Cool!  So you're coming back to this series, huh?  Looking 
forward to seeing how you tie everything together, without making it seem 
to contrived, when you've set it at such an early date.  Seeing it all 
from Akane's perspective (if that's how you're doing it -- that's the 
impression I got, anyway) should provide an interesting POV.

	Oh, but just one thing...

                               VOICE (V.O.)    
                   What though the field be lost?
                   All is not lost; th'unconquerable will
                   And study of revenge, immortal hate
                   And courage never to submit nor yield
                   And what is else not to be overcome?

	Don't mean to be anal here, and maybe it's just the student in me 
complaining, but if you're gonna quote Milton, maybe document it?  I 
mean, slapping on a reference at the end of the teaser wouldn't have 
damaged it none, and it'd appease whining weiners like me...

	Later!
	-Mike