I like the idea of the curse. If nothing else it would provide a
perfect disguise to let Ranma into Genom. It would be nice to see
Ranma's reaction to a girl who is bi-sexual and really likes him being
cursed.
  
I am surprised that Ryouga hasn't tried to modify the curse. Since the
cursed form apparently isn't aging in either of them, I would imagine
they don't want to get rid of it entirely, but changing into something
other than an eternally young piglet, i would have thought he'd have
tried. Maybe he did and failed.

 The spelling was a little rough in places but you said this was still
a draft so that's not unusual.

 You have improved this version by bringing in Ryouga, the one person
who would want to fight Ranma for letting the Tendo's die, after forty
years and the one person who would switch to Genom with equal ferocity.
This concept works for me better than the earlier versions I have seen.
  
Richard Robinson

rik@cfanet.com