I've completed revised versions of Hearts and Minds Preludes 1-4, using
some suggestions made by people on FFML and FFIRC. I didn't think the
changes were extensive enough to justify a repost, so they are posted to
my web site. If anyone wants them via E-mail, just ask (but please send
such requests to me privately). Those of you who had specific concerns
about these chapters may want to look over the revisions and see if I
addressed them well enough. I'm grateful for the response I've gotten so
far on this series, and I welcome any further comments, opinions, or
suggestions anyone has.

Parts 3 and 4 will be discussed on the Fanfic IRC panel tomorrow. This
panel meets every Sunday, on anime.terratron.com channel #fanfic
starting around 2-3 pm central US time. General discussions and fooling
around are first, and discussions of specific fanfics take place in the
evening. So come one, come all! If you haven't read the fic(s) to be
discussed, I can DCC them to you when you show up.



Gary Kleppe
kleppe@execpc.com, Home page http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe
My fanfics and the FFML map are on my comics/manga page,
       http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics