Thomas Schmidt wrote:

Ranma 1/2 is the property of Rumiko Takahashi, Viz Communications,
and a bunch of other people who are not me.

(True) Heart's Desire

<snip fic for easy to swallow C&Cing>


	Obviously she has NOT ever read The Monkies Paw! Other then that, not
bad at all. In fact, the prose flowed well, and for all it's shortness,
it felt complete. Akane's POV was relatively well done, only a few slips
of the author's personal views marring her thoughts <Kasumi and Nabiki
the most prominient>. This fic has so much naivety, so much innocense,
it IS like the wish of a young girl, and is very fitting for the subject
at hand. No time is wasted with too much thought on wish repurcussions,
which is good as you would have killed the ending with too much
character thought. Simple, sweet, and oh so KAWAII!, I liked it. ^_^ 

	You COULD continue with what Akane's life was like now, with her
mother, but for now, I'd DEFINATLY let it rest. Sort of like the ending
to Lonely Hearts and Furry Faces, for now, let's leave her in her
mothers arms, happy.

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