At 08:53 PM 4/09/97 -0700, Eric Adams wrote:

One of the best parts of the story is where Ukyou asks around about
Ranma, I like the style but I think that if each time you used why there
you might have her posing a different sort of question that she might be
grappling with.

I don't know, I think why pretty much summed it all up.

Ranma made me fairly disgusted at the end though, he better make some
damn fine restitution to Ukyou, for lying to her, this time on purpose!

I think a lot of people are going to be disappointed at the fates of
some of the characters...

These damn Saotome's are going to be the death of me... blood pressure
rising. gah....

Heh.

Please I have to beg you stop calling Ukyou he.  Its... uhh...
disturbing in a way that I can't place.

It is. But it says so much about her in this story...

Still I always liked Ukyou best so i may be biased on that.

Ever notice how it's often the ones who like her best who put her
through the worst time?

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