Subject: [C&C] [El-Hazard] Eighteenth Night
From: "Henry J. Cobb" <hcobb@slip.net>
Date: 8/29/1997, 1:42 AM
To: cdavies@gpu.srv.ualberta.ca
CC: fanfic@fanfic.com

Nice work on Afura and Mako-chan.



One thing that's missing is Afura's cover story for being in the library.



Perhaps she could mention that there doesn't seem to be anything new in

the collection.



Why does everybody assume that Mako-chan gets nowhere until the big

breakthrough?



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Makoto stared at the wooden box in front of him.  He had been so sure of

the settings for the eye of god that time.



The door on the front of the box opened and three people got out.  They

must have been very cramped inside it.



"Ah, you must be the one responsible for this diversion."  A middle aged

man in a long coat, knit muffler and floppy hat approached Makoto.  "How

do you do, I'm the Doctor."



	Henry J. Cobb	hcobb@slip.net          http://www.io.com/~hcobb