Subject: Re: Ani-Mayhem
From: "Chris Kelly" <crsk@hotmail.com>
Date: 8/28/1997, 11:37 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

Hey, I think it's great that you included Iria and Zeiram in your 
crossover, Iria is a great anime, one of my favorites, and very few 
people know about it, let alone write about it.  I don't know if you 
should hae the introductory scenes for some of in the characters and 
none for the others, I felt it broke the flow of the story for a bit 
while my mind adjusted.  And I doubt that Nene's scan would show that 
Zeiram was a boomer, maye a biological monster, but 100% organic.
																			Fizban


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