Well I have a friend that is working on fixing the story and he said it
might take a week or so and when I get the new version of it ill check
it and then send it over the mailing list and whoever requested it and
as allways if anyone has questions about the characters background ill
post something soon (I hope) but at least in a week or so Ill send the
new copy to see what you all think.....
ok now on to another subject Robert Morrison i am sorry about this so
called flame war but I knew this stuff would go to my head but asking me
to quit was a shot in the head for me and I dont like people saying
things so everyone knows the flame war never happened ok..

once again thank you for your time

--Aaron