Well now(carefully sets dinner next to laptop), let's see what's new on the
list.

At 09:18 PM 24/08/97 -0700, Dustin Goeller wrote:

Oocy Docy Pro
    by Me!

Well now(carefully pushes untouched dinner far, FAR away) that was...
interesting. We need more people like you(well, actually, I suspect 
we already have far too many people like you on this list. That's half
the fun.)

A few problems with spelling and grammar, nothing earth-shattering, you
might want to consider using a spell-checker or pre-readers. I'll send
you a private e-mail for the spelling/grammar stuff if you really, REALLY
want it.

The plot... the plot... actually, the plot made complete sense to me. Ranma
fell in love with the one who causes him the most pain and humiliation(well,
maybe Nabiki causes more humiliation, but still...), so is it a stretch to
think that he would fall for the woman who always activates his curse at the
worst times, causing him more pain and humiliation than even Akane could
manage... 

Now, if you'll excuse me, to quote Kermit, "I feel a little green."
(pushes dinner FURTHER away).

You don't have anything to worry about Dustin, your fic didn't suck,
it was quite funny. (I'm praying you wanted it to be funny...)

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