Chris.. you just keep getting better and better. Sublings is your
best work to date. I love it. 

	There is _one_ minor point that I'd like to pick, but, as I said,
it is minor. You may wish to include a scene where you show Mousse and
Ranma-chan battling, for the purpose of underscoring the fact that what
Andrew is doing is training Mousse to attack a female with only _edgeless_
weapons. Idea.. have Andrew instruct Ranma to spar with Mousse using
Shampoo's moves and style of combat, having taken a pair of her maces from
Mousse's Pile O' Weapons (TM., PAT. PEND.).

	Aside from that admittedly minor, (and, I admit, merely a
personal nitpick), this is a terrific story. Write on!

	Ed Becerra

	"Dreamers may die, but the dream is eternal..."