Subject: Fable's C&C [FFML] [R1/2] Guardian Angel
From: GuyverKuno@aol.com
Date: 8/23/1997, 10:56 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

I hate Genma Saotome

 Are you trying to prove a point? Or is it just for story plot? Hmmm.
Intresting. I like the idea of the Guardian Angel. First time I ever saw one
on this point. Kudos for you! The story went on nicely and was very original.
Most originals I read, including my own, happen to be very bland and kinda
suck. Well, the ones that sucked was just mine. Anyway,

The speed drills on the train tracks...
The strength drills against local boxers...
The horrible balance exercises on chain link fences...

Whoa... did Genma really train Ranma that way?

But, He told me, We do not kill. We protect life and all
its treasures. I must keep Ranma safe and minimize Genma's
damage to his psyche.

 Hmmm... are you very religious? Sorry to ask. Obviously you're most probably
some sort of christian. I happen to be Roman Catholic. I try not to be very
religious on stuff like this, or in life in general mainly because religion
is such a controversal issue. Maybe it's just me, but I try to respect every
religion there is. I would be very careful on this subject if I were. But the
way you put it... you didn't give much of a flame bait, so kudos for you
again!

I tried talking to the Angel who guarded Genma when he was
young. She only cried, smoked a cigarette, and ignored me.

 Sounds more like an old hag if you ask me... some angel...

Today, Ranma will die. They will come across a village of
Amazon warriors who devalue men. Genma will convince Ranma to
steal food, and the Amazons will hunt them down and butcher them
in their sleep like cattle.

 I'm not sure I quite get this part. The setting is that Ranma will steal
from them, not fight them, right! Then the guys die while going beddy by,
right? Cause the way I see, Genma would probably sell his son there for food
for himself. Maybe that's just me. Well, that's about it. Once again... Kudos
for the original idea!