Subject: Re: [FFML][C&C] HaM Prelude 4 - Ryoga & Akari: The Gift
From: Ronny Hedin
Date: 8/21/1997, 2:59 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

*eyes teary* Whee! Gary, I remember you saying (well, writing) "You're all
going to love the pig jokes" more than enough times. You're right. It's
hilarous.

	"I guess we should be going," Akari said. "I'm trying to scrape
up enough money so that we can honeymoon in Hawaii. I've got an uncle
who's really crazy about the place, and he says he can get us cheap
tickets. I'm sorry for trying to fool you, Akane, and I'm so glad you
like your new pet."

Obsession runs in the family, hm? BEATIFUL!

	"It's beautiful." Ryoga looked at Akari. She wasn't the woman
whose name sounded like hers, the one who he had adored for many months.
It didn't matter. In her own way, she was every bit as wonderful as
Akane. "Really beautiful."

Whee. By this point, eyes are getting teary again, for a totally different
reason. Maybe I'm just easily moved, but ... well, still.

	BTW, someone suggested having Ryoga's parents show up at the
wedding, totally by accident. I'm still thinking about whether to do
this. Any opinions?

*YES!*

Hm.

Could be used either for some comic relief, or just adding even more
emotion with a "happy reunion"-aspect. In any case, please do.

Yeah, I'm aware this is, mostly, not exactly *constructive* comments. Sorry.

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