Okay, I admit I overreacted a bit with that last post, and I've decided
after a lot of input that part four just wasn't up to par. I'm working on a
revision right now, and I'll post it when I finish it. I shouldn't have
acted like a big baby. I'm new, and not used to people getting offended by
the things I write. I'm working to improve it, and any suggestions for
future plots are welcome.

Until next time, 


Christina Rose