| Subject: Re: [FFML] [C&C] Tainted Honor, chapter three - Battlegrounds |
| From: David Johnston |
| Date: 8/20/1997, 11:16 PM |
| To: Gary Kleppe |
| CC: "Anime fanfiction mailing list (FFML)" <fanfic@fanfic.com> |
Gary Kleppe wrote:
I didn't quite understand why Akane just stood there while Kuno was pummeling Ryoga. I kept expecting her to intervene. (I know she never did this when it was Ranma vs. Kuno, but Ranma never looked like he was about to get beat.) Maybe you can explain what she was thinking a little more.
It's also a bit of a mystery why Ryouga is losing to Kuno. Lack of confidence? Death wish? Kuno's been training with a really good new sensei?