Richard Robinson wrote:

  I was impressed with this series. I have seen only a few parts, but
each part gets better written and more tightly plotted. I would have
loved to have seen  Andrew's fight, it makes me think about how
powerful these people are, and how much self-control they show, even
when they go wild, they still have to retain some control or they would
all, probably, be dead. I like Andrew and I hope to see more of him.
But I will say that I hate cliffhangers except when the sequel follows
-IMMEDIANTLY- !
Guess this guy didn't like Empire Strikes Back that much... Read about 

this one kid, ten years old, that went to see ESB in '81.  He came home 
from the movie, and threw his Han Solo action figure into the freezer 
until he got home from RotJ.  (Forgive me, I'm only half lucid.)

Actually, this series is one that kind of took me by surprise.  I was 
all set up to hate it, as it struck me as a very otaku-ish fic.  But I 
struck with it, and now I really enjoy it.  I jsut have one problem with 
this part.  Ryoga.  I really can't see Ryoga attacking Andrew just 
because Ranma wasn't there.  (Of course, I have a pro-Ryoga bias about 
as strong as Zen's pro-Ukyo.)  There isn't a fued between them IIRC.

Oh, well, aside from that, keep up the good work.

-- 
JD
Paladin of the Holy Pair
Verbena Mage
No-Brand Hero

Kiss me, Wind, kiss me... 
Hold me, Sky, hold me tight... 
And protect us, always, 
until we overcome and break down the walls, 
until we touch down and seize our dreams, 
because we were born 
to be happy. 

-Asu e Touchdown