Tried sending this direct, and it bounced, so thought I'd try 
through the FFML...

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	Gee, guess I'm a bit late with the feedback, huh?  Just trying to 
catch up on some of the C&C I wanted to do.
	Of course, it's be so long that I've forgotten some of the finer 
details... but I do remember really liking the story.  Nice, subtle... 
moves the action away from Akane and Ranma, and concentrates on the 
problems (which are just as, if not more serious) of their 'ordinary' 
classmates.  Avoids explicitly stating what's wrong in their lives, but 
makes it clear... and lead nicely into two girls experimenting with 
something both new and slightly frightning to them.
	Can't think of anything really constructive to say... whatever 
faults there might have been I've forgotten about.  Good story.
	(Then again, I'm a sucker for stories that deal with the 
'ordinary' people pushed off-camera by the chaos of the Ranma world...)

	-Mike Noakes

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