The distance you are keeping from the characters really shows in this chapter.



The rape scene falls flat for me, because I'm seperated from each of the

characters.



I can't feel it with Ranma, I can't feel it with Kasumi and I can't even

feel it with our narrator, Akane.  Their reactions are just too distant.



	Henry J. Cobb	hcobb@slip.net          http://www.io.com/~hcobb