Yes!  That kicked major ass!  The only thing I wasn't very happy about 
in your story was you making Ranma weaker than the others, but my doubts 
were just put to rest.  Seriously though, this fight scene is far 
superior to most of your others for two reasons.  One, it was not simply 
a mess of new Magic Techniques which the characters spontaneously 
produced.  Two, and much more importantly, when you had Sabin or Ranma 
do a new technique, you explained what was going on, such as when he 
used the Bum Rush against Ranma.  Having Ranma see the weakness and 
exploit it in detail brings the conflict to life, making it something he 
actually has to think and struggle with, instead of Ho-hum, I make a new 
magic technique to counter yours blah, blah.
Keep up the writing, I can't wait to see what happens.
						Fizban


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