Subject: [Teaser][Ranma] The Togetherness Factor 2 -- Teaser
From: "David Eddy" <dje@progress.com>
Date: 8/13/1997, 12:02 AM
To: "FFML" <fanfic@fanfic.com>

Some of you have been waiting for some time for the continuation to
"The Togetherness Factor".

I'm sorry to say that inbetween "Nekophobia" and work and some other
problems I've been having, Togetherness Factor has been getting short
shrift.

However, I've done about 40% of part 2.  I've decided that because of
the unconscionably long delay since part 1, I'll post most of what I've
done so far as a teaser.  [Everyone else is posting teasers, so why not
jump on the bandwagon?]

This is still pretty rough, and it covers two out of the five major plot
points I'd planned for this part.  Expect odd word usage, redundant
sentences, and other strangenesses.

With that said, I hope you enjoy it!

PS:  For those who wish to provide C&C, I'm aware that there is at least
one continuity problem in the bathroom scene.  Please also remember that
I use "Commonwealth" or British spelling, which means "s" instead of "z"
in some words, and "ou" instead of "o" in such words as colour, honour,
etc.

See the attached file for the story.

--
David Eddy -- Senior Consultant, Progress Software Melbourne
dje@progress.com
http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Towers/8341