Subject: Re: [FFML] [el hazard][1st test] The Switch, ch 1 & 2
From: Captain Jack
Date: 8/11/1997, 8:03 PM
To: Key <michael.h.chen@yale.edu>, "fanfic@fanfic.com" <fanfic@fanfic.com>

    Somewhere else in the Royal Palace, Shayla Shayla was getting
quite verbal with the princess.  "Get away from me now!!!!!"  Her
desperate voice echoed through out, her voice mingling with
Fatora's.

Shayla's desparate?  more like annoyed voice

    Alielle, like most girls, was attracted to the sparky object.
She grabbed it carefully from Makoto's hands to get a better
look.  "Wow, it's beautiful!" she exclaimed as she carefully
placed it back on the stand.

don't you mean sparkly objects?  would scare me if she liked sparky
ones, never mind, she probably likes those too :P

    "Alielle!  There you are!"  Makoto turned around, to meet the
person who addressed him.  Alielle remained quite depressed,
staring at the ring in his hand.  She placed it back on the left
side of the stand next to Makoto's.  The damage had been done,
and she didn't want to hold the wretched thing anymore.

I thought she couldn't take it off...

right now."  Fatora held up a key.  "And I have to(the) key to the
baths."

(sp)

hehe...so when will the next chapter be ready?