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From: pioneer <pioneer@prtc.net>
To: Christina Rose <cristina@netdoor.com>
Cc: Fan Fic Mailing List <fanfic@fanfic.com>
Subject: Re: [FFML] [Slayers/Ranma][Xover] Slayers 1/2: Part Three
Date: Thursday, August 07, 1997 9:26 PM

WHAT!! That's IT!! That's all he get's!!! NO WAY!! Akane might have
forgiven him
in a couple of days but she would pounded him into the floor a couple of
times!
Oh well, that's what they call artistic license. 

Heh heh... :P

Anyways, (now that I've gotten that out of my system) it's good series.
The way 
the characters from both series act towards each other is nice and the
action 
flows really well. I love what you did Goury!

Thanks! ^_^ I love getting praise!

 The only thing I don't

like is the 
way you're characterizing Ranma.

Aw, not _this_ again... Look, I'm gonna improve on this later, since I've
gotten a lot of complaints regarding this. 

Contrary to what Akane might say, Ranma is not 'that' much of a jerk.
The only times
he isunlts Ryoga is after he says he going to kill him or he's doing
something with 
Akane and he does that out of jelousy.

Hm? What's that again? Ranma is not 'that' much of a jerk? Ack, another
defender of Ranma...Yes he is, but i do admit to exaggerating it _just_ a
teensy-weensy bit. Not that much of an exaggeration, but I'm saying this
for those who really think Ranma's better than that. 

 You were right on the money about

insulting 
Lina thow.

Heh, I try...

Finally, if your going to pair up Akane & Ryoga, don't do it
instanteneosly after the
first date. Also, don't make Ranma give up to easily on Akane. 

Sure, why not?

Hey! I've got an idea! Why not pair up Lina and Ranma. The're perfect
for each other!
I'd love to read about that!!

So would I... ;) Maybe, maybe not, you'll just have to wait and see!