Subject: [fanfic][Ranma1/2] untitled PT.1
From: Bryan Cupp
Date: 8/7/1997, 1:34 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com
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Ok this is my first story to actualy finish.
C&C is requested. along with name sujestions.

this could also turn into another wish fic.
the wish would be Ranma's or Ryoga's.
one of them would wish that Ryoga had never 
followed them to jusenkyo, or that Genma had
never been able to find jusenkyo(ryoga found it
or Ryoga went with them instead of following them)
please give me your thoughts on this and enjoy the 
story.



 Ranma 1/2:


 insert standard disclaimer here


   The screen opens to a man reading a postcard.  He turns it over
and we can see what it says

     Soun,

  Bringing Ranma from china
  Be there on the 5th of april

    Genma

  Soun looks over to a calender that is hanging on the wall and we
can see that it is april 3rd

Soun:  How I've waited for this day!! [thinks] Better not tell them
though, don't want to get them upset before he gets here.

   Soun winces thinking of the last time he upset Akane and Nabiki.
 he gets up and goes to the phone.

We can here a voice answer the phone, but we can't understand what is
bining said.

Soun: Its Soun

Soun: yes, he will be here on the fith

Soun: Ok, see you then, bye.


                             ************

Girl:[thinks]  Great its raining again just what I need now.

Boy: Too bad you don't have an umbrella Ranma

Ranma-chan: yeah, well if it wernt for pop draging us out here in
   the first place I wouldn't have needed one would have I.

Boy: Stop your whinning.

Ranma-chan: Just because you always have that stupid umbrella with
   you.

Boy: well we are going to meat your fiancee.

Ranma-chan: which wasn't my idea, and I still say the whole thing
  sucks. Picking a fiancee for me without even asking.
  
  Ranma is suddenly attacked by a large panda.  It takes several
swipes at Ranma, but all miss.

Boy: well would it have made a difference if he had asked?

Ranma-chan: No! but that's besides the point Ryoga.

  Ranma lauches her own attack against the panda and knocks it down.

Ranma-chan: We'er going back to china now, so suck on that old man.

  Ranma turns and begings walking away followed closely by Ryoga who
is still holding his red umbrella above his head. Behind them the
panda is getting up and starts walking twards them. when it is within
reach it smacks Ranma over the head with a sing knocking her out.

Ryoga: Do you really think that was nessesary?

  All Ryoga got in response was a growl that scared off all the
spectators that had been gathering.

                        ********************

Soun: Kasumi,Nabiki,Akane

  looking into the kitchen

Soun: Kasumi

Kasumi: Yes, father

  Looking into a bedroom

Soun: Nabiki

Nabiki: what do you want?

  Looking into another bedroom

Soun: Akane, now were is that girl?

Woman's voice: What's wrong Soun?

Soun: Akane's not in her room do you know where she is?

Woman's voice: yes, I'll go get her.

Soun:  Thank you Nodoka

*************

  We see Akane kneeling in front of a cinder block getting ready
to strike it.

Akane: Kyaaaa

  The cinder block goes to pieces, one of which stops in font of
someones foot.

Nabiki: This is what makes the boys think you are so wierd Akane

Akane:  Well not everyone thinks the world revolves around _BOYS_
  Nabiki.

Nabiki: well I guess you wont want to here about this then

Nodoka: Akane-chan your father wants to talk to you.

Akane:  Ok, Thanks aunti Saotome

Nodoka: don't tell me those boys are still attacking you every day.

Akane:(looking downcast) yes.

Nodoka: well don't worry that will change

Akane: Not with Kuno around.

Nodoka: I'm going to the market for some items. I'll be back a little
 later.

 *************

Kasumi: Fiancee?

Soun: Yes, the son of an old friend of mine. If one of you were to
 marry him, and carry on our schools then our families would be
 secure. Recently they crossed into China.

Nabiki: wow, China

Akane:[Thinks] so they hiked all the way to China big deal.

Kasumi: How old is he? Younger men are so... young.

Nabiki: Is he cute?

Soun: I don't know

Nabiki: You don't know

Soun: I've never met him

Akane:[Thinks] oh this is just great, bad enough he gets us engaged
 but to have never even met the person...

 Akane's thoughts are interupted by a noise comming from the font
door. Nabiki and Soun start to get up and head for the door.

Nabiki: That must be them.

Soun: Saotome my friend

 Kasumi gets up to follow them out, and Akane follows behind her
still scowling.

Kasumi: I hope he's older than me.

 Nabiki and Soun return running. Akane and Kasumi come to where
Soun and Nabiki have stoped running. a panda with Ranma over its
sholder and Ryoga walking beside it.

Kasumi: So father this is your friend?

 Soun just shakes his head.

Nabiki: So this panda just decided to drop by.

 Soun shakes his head again.

Ranma: Put me down pop, your scarin them spittless.

 the panda puts Ranma down beside Ryoga. Soun points at Ryoga

Soun: You wouldn't be...

Ryoga: Nope, I'm Ryoga Hibiki.[point twards Ranma] This is Ranma

Soun: So Your Ranma.

Ranma: I'm Ranma Saotome, sorry about this.

Nabiki: He is cute.

 Soun grabes Ranma into a huge. He pauses as he relizes that Ranma
has a very large chest for a boy and squieses Ranma a few times.
Soun takes a step back and stairs at Ranma. Nabiki looks at Soun
then steps up to Ranma and pokes Ranma's chest.

Nabiki: Ranma's not a boy dady, he's a girl

 Soun did the only thing he could think of, faint.

*************

Kasumi: Poor father, I bet he's dissapointed.

Nabiki: He's dissapointed, what about me.

Soun: I thought Genma's son Ranma was a boy.

Nabiki:[grabing Ranma's breast] Does this look like a boy to you dady

Ranma: I wish you'd stop that

Akane: You herd her nabiki, stop that she's a guest. [to Ranma] I'm
 Akane wana be friends?

Ranma and Ryoga: sure

 Akane scowls slightly at Ryoga, but it vanishes quickly.

Akane:[thinks] well he hasn't attacked me yet, so maybe...[to Ranma]
 you study kempo right

Ranma: a little.

Akane: why don't we have a little match then.

Ranma: o-ok.

 Ranma, Ryoga and Akane get up and head twards the dojo. when they
enter the dojo Ryoga sits near one of the walls and Ranma and Akane
take potisions in the center of the dojo.  Akane enters a fighting
stance while Ranma just stands waiting.

Akane:[thinks] maybe she dosn't know any martial arts. Better take
 it easy.

 Akane launched a simple punch twards Ranma, but Ranma merrly dodges
to the side of it.

Akane:[thinks] Ok, maybe she does

 Akane then launches herself into a quick series of punches and kicks
that are all dodged.

Akane:(getting frustrated) whats wrong attack me.

 Akane launches into another set of attackes and everyone of them are
dodged again.

Akane:[thinks] what, is she reading my moves. This time for real then

 She lauches herself into her fastest attack. For a moment it looks
like it will connect, but then Ranma leaps up. The next thing she
notices is that she is being poked in the back of the head.
 Akane turnes around.

Akane walking twards the exit: Your prettey good, good thing your not
 a boy.

 on her way out Akane gives Ryoga a sour look, but says nothing.

Ranma: what was that about?

Ryoga: I don't know, but I don't think she likes me very much.

Ranma: Just giver her some time. she probably thiks your going to be
 engaged to one of them, quite possibly her.

**********

Kasumi: Ryoga you can have this room.

 Ranma and Ryoga put down their backpacks

Kasumi: Ranma you can sleep with Akane.

Ranma: Uh, Kasumi I don't think thats a good idea.

Kasumi: You've been working out haven't you

Ranma: Yes...

Kasumi: Here you can take a bath now.

Ranma: O-ok

**********

 Ranma dumps some cold water over her self

Ranma: thats cold

**********

 Nabiki walks into the kitchen

Nabiki: Kasumi, who is that strange man with father?

Kasumi: I don't know, would you tell Akane she can take her bath now

 Nodoka walks into the kitchen

Nodoka: I'm back. Have they gotten here yet?

Kasumi: yes, Ranma's in the bath right now though

***********

 Akane enters the bathroom and starts to undress, noticing Ranma's
cloths.

Akane:[thinks] Ranma must already be in their, guess we can take our
 baths together.

*******

Ranma:[thinks] What to do....  Well may as well go out as I am.
 The'll find out sooner or later anyway.

 Ranma stands up just as the door is opened. he looks over to see a
naked Akane coverd by a towl that leaves little to his imagination.

*******

 Akane had just opened the door to the furo to see a very naked man
standing in the furo. She stared at him a moment, then noticed him
staring back at her. Calmly she steped back and closed the door. she
put some of her cloths back on then left the bathroom, and screamed.
she ran down the stairs and picked up the table.

Akane: I'm gona kill him

Kasumi: whats wrong Akane?

Akane: There's a pervert in the bathroom.

Nabiki: Well why did't you just clober him then?

Akane: I got scared ok!

 Boy walks into the room.

Kasumi: Who are you?

 Nodoka walks into the room

Ranma: I'm Ranma Saotome, sorry about this.

 Nodoka runs over to Ranma. Akane drops the table.
 
Nodoka:[huging Ranma] Ranma how are you.

Kasumi: You mean you were that girl from before?

Ranma: yes

Nodoka: What do you mean, was he the girl from before

Kasumi: I don't know the hole story but when Ranma got here there
 was a girl,[points at Ranma] Ranma Saotome, a boy [points at Ryoga]
 Ryoga Hibiki, and a panda, they called it pops but I don't know
 where it went to.

Nodoka:[looking over at Genma agrily] You had better have a good
 explination for this Genma Saotome or else.[glances to a corner
 where we see a long item that is wraped in cloth.]

 Genma glances where his wife had looked to. when he sees what it
is he pales.

Genma:(nurvisly) U-uh yes dear. Its nice to see you again.

Nodoka: yes, it is, but you had better start explaining. NOW!

Ranma & Ryoga: Whats going on?

Nodoka:[to Ranma] What didn't he tell you?

Ranma: Tell me what?

Nodoka: About the promis he made to me before he left with you on
 the training trip.

Ranma:[Glaring at Genma] No he didn't.

Nodoka: well he promissed to rais you to be a man omong men or you
 both would commit seppuku.

everyone exept Genma and Nodoka: Seppuku?!

Ryoga: gee Ranma you don't have anything to worry about then

Nodoka:(hopefuly) he dosen't

Ryoga: execpt for your jusenkyo curse that is.

Ranma: Your not helping Ryoga.

Nodoka: Genma you had better start explaining _NOW_!

Genma: Ok, I can explain everything. As you all know this is Ranma
 Saotome, I am Genma Saotome

Ranma: and this is Ryoga Hibiki.We found him some time ago. When we
 found him he was lost, we took him home and waited three days for
 someone to return to his house but they never did. It was dicided
 that he would come with us and we would check back at his house
 from time to time. It seems however that his family has a horrible
 sence of direction, and was never at home so Ryoga stayed with us.
 We kept him from wondering off most of the time, but every once in a
 while he would escape us and we would have to search for about four
 days to a week to find him again. about two months ago Ryoga wanderd
 off again while we were looking for jusenkyo. Unfortunatly for us he
 found it, and if it wasn't for him we would never have found it. The
 springs there have a strange cure on them that who ever falls into
 them takes the form of whatever downd there. I fell into the spring
 of drownd girl, pop fell into the spring of drownd panda and Ryoga
 fell into the spring of black pigglet. cold water changes us into
 our cursed forms and hot water changes us back.

Soun: Your problem ain't so bad after all, Kasumi she's 19, Nabiki 17
 and Akane she's 16 pick anyone of them and they'll be your new
 fiancee.

Kasumi: I think Akane would be the wises choice.

Nabiki: couldn't agree more sis.

Akane: what why me?

Nabiki: well you hate guys right, well Ranma's part girl.

Nodoka: GENMA! How could you looking for a dangerus place like that.

Ranma: and you didn't even speak a word of chinese, so when the guid
 tried to worn us about the curses you coudn't understand what he
 was saying.

Genma: Ranma you sound like a girl.[ thows Ranma into the Koi pond]
 How I'm shamed my own son. whern't you prepared to lay down you life

Ranma: My life yes, my manhoods another question though.

 Ranma kicks genma into the pond.

 Kasumi brings out some hot water.

Kasumi: you sure have some interesting freinds father.

Nodoka: Ranma! Genma! stop it at once and come in here.

Ranma-chan: yes mom

Genma-panda:[writen sing] yes dear.

***********

Nodoka: now as for you two commiting seppuku, I don't see the need
 for it yet, but you Genma are on thin ice. Now as for this
 engagement, I am not thrilled about it, but I will let it stand
 for now, but when they reach the age of majority they will have the
 choice to keep it or not. is that clear?[Nodoka waits for Genma and
 Soun to nod their heads] good

Akane: Me marry that pervert, no way.

Ranma: Me a pervert

Akane: you saw me in the nude you lech

Ranma: you took a pretty good look youself

Akane: Its differnt when a girl looks at a guy.

Ranma: well its not like I've never seen a naked girl before, right
 I mean I've seen my self plenty of times, and I'm better built to
 boot.

 Akane grabes the table and slams it over his head.

**************

Kasumi: Oh your awake now.

Nodoka: don't be to harsh on her Ranma, Akane just has had a hard
 time with boys lately.

Nabiki: oh like that explains it all Mrs. Saotome.

***********

Ranma: what kind of a girl is she anyway?

 Ranma heads into the bathroom and gets undressed. he splashes
 himself with some cold water and heads twards the furo. suddenly the
 door opens and Akane is there.

Akane: why you...Pervert.

 Akane slaps Ranma in the face.

*********

Nabiki: you were both girl at the time so it was ok.

Akane: Ok, ok isn't what I would call it

Genma: so she has spunk, that makes a fiancee that much more cute.

Ranma: cute is not the word.

 Ranma and Akane turn and glance at each other.

Ranma:[thinks] she is deffinitly not cute.


          end for now