Damn.. this is a _great_ piece of fiction, Sean. You make me want
to burn my word processor as a gesture of homage. <Sigh> I wish I could
write half this smoothly.

	And I blush deeply and profoundly to be mentioned in the same
paragraph (not to mention the same _sentence_) as great authors like Bert
Van Vliet, Twister, and Hitomi Ichinoei. The thought that I might have has
any effect on this wonderful story, no matter how small, is incredible, in
the oldest sense of the word.

	I don't really know if this is the sort of fic that can be
extended any further, as you seemed to have wrapped things up rather
neatly.. but if you ever decide to write in this particular reality again,
I'll be the FIRST in line to volunteer to pre-read.

	<Shrug> Guess that's all I have to say for now.

	Except.. GREAT STORY!

	Ed Becerra

	"Dreamers may die, but the dream is eternal..."