Ahhh, it's always great to read another Vampire fanficton, and yours 
certainly has potential.  I am not very familiar with Vampire the 
Masquerade, other than the basic clan knowlege from playing th Jyhad 
card game for a while.  Something just strikes me wrong about Mackie 
being a vampire though.  The real question is how is he going to 
interact with the Knight Sabers?  That is up to you if you continue with 
this story.  BTW, don't you think Priss would make an excellent Brujah?  
A liking for strong, upfront brawling, rebellious against society, 
constant biking leathers, and a compelling physical stage prescence.  
					It's allways great to meet another Seattle-ite Mlister!
																												Fizban


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